The hill was near,
My ride was severe,
Hope hovered there and here,
Brewing thoughts into the sphere,
The sphere with no thread,
Everything unseen in tread,
Life was not completely read,
Urge of it never had commenced.
Standing with my eyes open,
Felt just a way hope-hopen,
Coming back to the reason,
Why things ever happen ?
Every cloud has its light,
Some are in and out of sight,
Dwindling thoughts seemed right,
Pandemonium is always a fright,
Never mind i stood my stance,
Giving none an offensive chance.
No fight, no fright, even for a glance,
Nature itself fought it without a lance.
10 comments:
Well I am falling short of words to say something.
Firstly,the description of your blog title says a lot.
Then this article is a great start.
Hope to see more of your writing and wish you a great success ahead.
Welcome to the blog World :)
And I am happy to have got the opportunity to be the first one to comment on the first post of yours :)
Thanks Sandya... it really means a million.
I see your 8th and raise you... Happy blogging!
wise words..
well put.
welcome to JP...
A+
great! here’s mine for this new year potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/15/life/
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hello to all of you,
though present here are only few,
comments given by you are of golden hue,
they 've stirred my thoughts in and through,
for ever I am grateful to all of you,
thank you,thank you
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